Promise's Promises

Guess who's back wit a lil more to say this time lol ! So i have recently got back in-touch with a friend from way back and her skills are impeccable! I will be sure to share some of her pieces soon enough... TRUST ME ! Anywhoo, she talkin me through this hole thing lol .. coaching i guess you could say! Channeling feelings into a rap verse is soo much different than Poetry.. In a sense its the same but oh soo different! So we jus going to get right in to it and as usual im asking for your honest opinion! All feedback is great feedback haha! With that being said .. Leggooooo

Promise's Promises

As far as where you got your guard at,

im playin limbo under that bar to get where your hearts at.

reconstructin' your mental wit.. no toolbelt or hard hat,

i jus wanta .. re-build dat house of love from where he left off at.

see.. no matter the cost im willing to pay it,

and .. you sing a sad song but im ready to play it!

break down every verse before it leaves your lips and

re-live every word if you let me do the adlibbin'.

my bad misses.. i just get a rush from your kisses,

and your touch i forgot to mention...

is like the mega millions, and im holding the winning ticket!

Dig it? happiness is in arms reach of a strong hands grasp and

when i see you i gasp and

immediately its lights.. camera.. action!

Knock Knock.. who's there? .. "passing"

"passing" who ?

Passing you if you dont stop with the question asking!

see im all about passion,

but i got class too and i'll act a damn fool

if thats what it takes to get you laughin!

Promise's promises, see i promise to never break a promise and,

i promise to never break your heart again,

yeah i know.. thats a promise you heard time and time again,

difference is.. my promise is Promising!

- Promise